The Federation of Neryn [Campaign]

[Vas]

- Ralle -> english translation: done! -> could be better said Ben
- Lewin -> little assistance to scripts and english texts: done!
- AntiVirus -> dutch translation: done! -> has some mistakes said dicsoupcan
- Nayot - czech translation: done!

- Pawel -> polish translation: 80% -> missing some messages
- Bence -> hungarian translation: 80% -> missing some messages

- Supamanxd -> german speaker: 50%
- Antorax -> background music for briefings: 50%



Latest Version:
Download The Federation of Neryn_23.05.2013.rar
You need at least the second Release Candidat for playing this!
Mission 5 & 6 do not work yet, because they are using new script commands!

Please send me replays, also from failed missions. Tell me about difficulty and other things comming into your mind.

[Vatrix]

Are czech translations with briefings speech?

[Vas]

no, there is only one speaker yet (german).

[Ben]

Sorry to keep you in the dark for so long. I've been practicing reading the dialog a lot, but I can't keep it sound professional. Further, my voice is much too high, so I also need to lower it using an editing program (which I'd rather not do if I could avoid it).
I think that one reason I am having trouble reading it is because the English translation isn't perfect. It is awkward and just doesn't sound natural. Would you be okay if I refined it to make it more fluent?

[Kungen]

How to complete mission 6?

[Vas]

How to complete mission 6?

you can't be serious... are you? xD

@Ben
Didn't know about that. Yes please, I'm very interessted in it.
You can write me your ICQ, Sykpe or EMail adress via PN : )

[dicsoupcan]

How to complete mission 6?

you can't be serious... are you? xD

@Ben
Didn't know about that. Yes please, I'm very interessted in it.
You can write me your ICQ, Sykpe or EMail adress via PN : )

Well i do am interested in that myself, but i guess that the script is not working, since i get some kind of UNITDIRECTION error, the same thing happens for mission 7, where you only have 15 xbows and do not see your ally who apperently becomes under attack by melee and ranged troops. i assume the script would have given you melee troops. also in mission 9 i got a syntax error and i never got a defeated message even when all my troops died. I also found some dutch translation errors if you are interested in getting that fixed.

I do have to say that mission 3 and 10 are by far my most favorite, since i like building very much. I totally have no idea how i beat mission 4, but it seemed that when i was trying i lost, and when i was not trying i won^^

you might have some interest in a replay of mission 3 to see a weird attack i did on the closest ai player without using soldiers .

Vas.rar

Overall i did enjoy your campaign, but still hope your next chapter includes more building the fighting missions were hard, the building missions were challenging as in managing resources. As you will see in the replay ofmission 10 i ran out of gold and my tactic became starving the enemy

[Vas]

You need at least the second Release Candidat for playing this!
Mission 5 & 6 do not work yet, because they are using new script commands!

I think you mean mission 5. Yes there you get some horses and melee troops.
Which numbers does the syntax error message put out? Thats strange.. maybe you can upload a screenshot? Win and Defeat are running by script, so it can't work if an error happened before.

I totally have no idea how i beat mission 4, but it seemed that when i was trying i lost, and when i was not trying i won^^

yees.. I know exactly what you mean Somehow it is like this in that mission xD

Thank you very much for replays. It was funny to watch it. I think the barracks wall in mission 10 wasn't needed, the entrance to your town is very small and good to defend. You needed over 4 hours... the enemies are very stubborn right?
By the way, mission 5 & 6 are also building missions..

[T*AnTi-V!RuZz]

Sorry to keep you in the dark for so long. I've been practicing reading the dialog a lot, but I can't keep it sound professional. Further, my voice is much too high, so I also need to lower it using an editing program (which I'd rather not do if I could avoid it).
I think that one reason I am having trouble reading it is because the English translation isn't perfect. It is awkward and just doesn't sound natural. Would you be okay if I refined it to make it more fluent?

To be honest I combined the English translation with the German original to translate to Dutch, because I noticed the English wasn't that well translated from German (but I certainly couldn't do better).

[krisdw]

I'm going to try the Dutch speaking. I don't know if my voice is good enough for something like this though.

Edit:

I have just recorded a sample (Dutch). Could someone take a listen and tell me if it's good enough to continue?
Does anybody know where I could upload it?

To the Dutchies; I hope it doesn't bother you that I'm Belgian. I just speak Algemeen Nederlands, I don't use dialects so don't worry about that

[Ben]

Does anybody know where I could upload it?

Upload it here, kolego. Just use the "upload attachment" button at the bottom of post window (use the "full editor" and not "quick reply").

[krisdw]

I tried, but .wav is not supported. What extention should I use? I recorded the file with Audacity.

[Lewin]

I tried, but .wav is not supported. What extention should I use? I recorded the file with Audacity.

ZIP it first. The forum only supports ZIP files as attachments I think.

[Vas]

@krisdw
you could also send me the file via mail, but if you post it here other dutch people could judge it better

latest version is included in RC 3 : )

Todo:
- missing some hungarian messages (e.g. mission 10)
- missing some polish messages (e.g. mission 10)
- dutch translation has some mistakes said dicsoupcan
- german speaker: 1 briefing is missing
- english translation sounds not naturally said ben

If anybody can help, please write me : )
I'm looking forward to feedback and replays

[Lewin]

Just letting you know that we sent your campaign text to all our translators along with the normal Remake text. The Norwegian guy has already translated it
So maybe don't take up any more offers of translations until we see how many of our translators translate it.