Hi, here i am again.
i have downloaded your map now, and there is a lot of work to do xD
1) you have no win or lose conditions!
2) Try to make some ravines in your mountains, they are really boring now
3) You have trees in your coal fields
4) your ally don't build a villages because there is no stone.
5) the yellow players don't attack or anything else pretty boring.
6) the soldiers died from the yellow player because in the town is a traffic jam.
7) your map is to flat
8) place the right trees on the right ground types, for example no pine trees on grass.
9) the light blue players does nothing.
10) to much grass, make more variation in your map.
11) there is a "unequalize" tool use it
12) you don't need to make stone
13) you don't need to make gold
14) some terrain titles don't match
15) your bridge is weird, is lower that the water.
16) i cant see the back side of your mountains.
i have said pretty much about it, i hope you can do something with it
I like it that you try to make a map, keep going and it will go better and better
greets job