What's wrong in this map?

[dicsoupcan]

What ben basically meant is to make more variety within your brackets. i crafted a fast example for you.

i took the map you gave in post #1, and just edited it a little bit to make it more clear:

before:

KaM Remake 2014-12-26 21-31-33.jpg

After:

KaM Remake 2014-12-26 21-35-29.jpg

offcrouse i did not edit the elevation, but i believe you know that needed to be changed already

[Esthlos]

Mmm... thanks, I think I understood now.

I'll work on it, and upload it when it will feel ready... if you won't mind judging it one more time, of course.

(Besides, I'll need some feedback on its finished script too )