On Golden Cliffs you've lost 38 citizens after 1:30, you are allowed to loose not more than 20.
That building plan is no problem, a problem is one of your towers not ready at 60th minute (no recruit and no stones). Not a big deal, but pay attention to that.
Few tips if I may:
- block stone delivery earlier, you did it really late (at around 0:30). It's good to store stone for some time if you see you are low on it, but it's not necessary doing it for so long
- you can block any particular weapon delivery in Barracks, so trade is smoother (you could've done it with axes)
- try to aim for 50 serfs at 0:30, with that your delivery system would work better
- in this test you're allowed to train all soldiers at PT and not feed them, so that your food economy is better for your city. Of course it's greater challenge if you don't
I can imagine that it might be annoying for you to play Golden Cliffs again by yourself, so if you want and have time tomorrow, we can play it together 1v1, so it's more interesting

Write me PM if you are interested.