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King Karolus
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Re: English TPR briefings
Finally got the time to check through these.
Mission 10: I like take 3 the best but it has a slight error near the end "thou must need". Perhaps the last sentence could be copied over from take 4 as to make take 3 perfect.
Mission 11: Both take 2 and 3 are good, but take 3 might be slightly better.
Mission 12: I like take 2 the best.
Mission 13: Take 3 is good.
Mission 14: You have used the old/original briefing in all the takes
Mission 10: I like take 3 the best but it has a slight error near the end "thou must need". Perhaps the last sentence could be copied over from take 4 as to make take 3 perfect.
Mission 11: Both take 2 and 3 are good, but take 3 might be slightly better.
Mission 12: I like take 2 the best.
Mission 13: Take 3 is good.
Mission 14: You have used the old/original briefing in all the takes